ENGL 101
English Composition I
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• Editing and revision are often confused
• Revision is about the big picture overall content, organization, paragraphs, etc
• Editing is about the small stuff
• Sentences, grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc.
• It’s the polish, the final detailing to make the essay presentable to the reader
• Doesn’t have to be painful
• People assume that their writing is full of errors
• Most writers have SOME editing problem areas
• Learn what your problem areas ARE
• Go quickly through stronger areas (don’t ignore them entirely)
• Focus on YOUR problem areas
• Different writing situations require different editing approaches
• Technical/informative writing needs to be very precise and accurate
• Personal writing can be more flexible
• Good grammar is always important to send positive signals
• Poor grammar distracts the reader always gives negative impression
• Some people rely solely on computer’s spellcheck and grammar check
• DON’T
• You don’t want to sound like a computer
• Personal style/expression gets lost
• Spellcheck isn’t foolproof mine doesn’t like the word spellcheck, for example
• They are a good first step at least the spellcheck is
• Ears are our most effective editing tool
• We recognize improper grammar instantly when we hear it
• So read your essay out loud
• Read what you’ve actually WRITTEN, not what you MEANT to say
• When you find a clinker, use your vocal grammar skills to say the “right” version
• Correct the original immediately
• When we read an essay, we get into the content and flow
• Editing isn’t about content, remember?
• Read last sentence first
• Then next sentence, etc.
• This forces you to read each sentence independently
• You will recognize unclear pronouns, missing words, etc. more easily
• Most writers have a consistent sentence length/style that they use
• Any variation from that pattern is more likely to be wrong (fragment/run-on, etc)
• Put fingers on either end of first sentence
• Measure other sentences in comparison
• When fingers get closer together or farther apart, pay more attention to that sentence
• Doesn’t mean it WILL be wrong, but a good, quick indicator of highest risk
• Requires writer to really know their problem areas
• Go through and circle what you usually have problems with
• Circle the pronouns, for example
• Review that section of your handbook
• Then go back and review what’s circled
• Most will be correct, and you can more easily fix the others