ENGL 101
English Composition I
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Compare / Contrast
Comparison is finding similarities in items that appear to be different: apples/oranges
Contrast is finding differences in items that appear to be the same: red delicious/braeburn
- Com/Con essay uses both comparison and contrast
- But focuses on one or the other depending on the subject
- Show us something we DON’T know
- Something that isn’t obvious from the subjects themselves
- Important to move beyond the obvious
- Not just about the differences/similarities
- Essay explains WHY they exist
- Essay is about giving them a purpose a meaning a reason to compare/contrast
- Audience affects how you approach what they know or don’t know
- Similar to Classification in that you divide subject into smaller points
- Different in that you focus on 2 or 3 specific subjects, not large quantities
- Much more specific, not general
- Not types of customers, but comparing Bob to Bill as a customer
- Com/Con can just be about information
- But usually used to explain preference
- Why one truck is better for lawn service
- Skim milk as a better purchase
- Investing with or without tech stocks
- DVD versus VHS
- Electronic bill paying as alternative
Your purpose affects the preference
- Cats versus Dogs
- As pets
- As Guardians of Home
- As companions
- As pest control
- Com/Con based on Criteria
- If buying a truck for a lawn service, you aren’t comparing trucks to each other
- You are comparing to the ideal truck
- Set up the important criteria for the ideal
- Then compare/contrast each subject to those criteria to determine best fit
- Let’s compare/contrast colleges
- What are you looking for in a college?
- Which are MOST important now?
- How do CCC and UNK compare to these criteria?
- Most preferences do not meet all criteria perfectly.
- Which one is better, at this time?
- Decide what you are actually comparing
- Not the actual subjects, but the general topic
- Not Braun vs. Oral-B, but toothbrushes
- Not Ford vs. Dodge, but a truck
- What is our purpose?
- What criteria affect this subject?
- What of those criteria matter the most?
- How do options/subjects fit?
- Which one matches our criteria best?
- How you organize the argument is important to com/con essay
- What needs to come first?
- What do you want to emphasize?
- Do you deal with “weaker” points first?
- Do you start with a BANG?
- The real question with com/con, however, is whether you want to emphasize the subjects/options or the criteria (emphasizing criteria is usually better)
Subject by Subject Organization
Intro set up purpose/audience
Subject A explanation/description
Criteria 1 how it fits
Criteria 2 how it fits
Subject B explanation/description
Criteria 1 how it fits
Criteria 2 how it fits
Conclusion ties everything together does the head-to-head comparison (long)
Point by Point Organization
Introduction sets up purpose/audience
Criteria 1 explanation/definition
Subject A how it fits (if it fits)
Subject B how it fits (if it fits)
Criteria 2 explanation/definition
Subject A how it fits (if it fits)
Subject B how it fits (if it fits)
Conclusion tallies up the comparisons pulls everything together (usually shorter)
Mixed Organization
Introductionsets up purpose/audience
Subject A explanation/description
Subject B explanation/description
Criteria 1 explanation/definition
Subject A
Subject B
Criteria 2 explanation/definition
Subject A
Subject B
Conclusion ties everything together
Mixed Organization
Introductionsets up purpose/audience
Criteria 1 show how it is really same for Subject A and B
Subject A how different from B
Criteria 2
Criteria 3
Subject Bhow different from A
Criteria 2
Criteria 3
Conclusion ties it all together